3 Scamp Designs and Crit feedback

Within the crit we were asked by Lorraine and simon to come up with 5 questions which we would like to be answered, so below are my 5 questions,

• Is there too much imagery within the page? Does it take up Too much space?
• Does it look overcrowded?
• Should it have more colour?/ is it too dark with the black?
• Should there be more information on the homepage? if so what would it be and where would it go?
• Does the white and black work?
• Should the title be more specific to the summer brief?
• What else could go on the page? 
• Is the Imagery relevant?

 Scamp 1

Scamp 2

Scamp 3 

Feed back from the crit, 

After having the crit we discussed questions and which ones were good and which ones were bad, 

this is what we came up with..

• No loaded questions 
• Don't ask "does it work"
• Don't ask "what would you change"
• Write useful questions 
• Be specific 
• Always ask why they propose what they are saying